“Hello, ma?” She heard only this and ran towards the car screaming in joyful excitement. While driving, she congratulated her husband back home.
An hour later.
Room #55, she thrust open the door only to see a grim faced son-in-law lamenting inconsolably. The collection of new-born essentials, Coconut Prasad, Flowers went thud on the floor.
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8 comments:
nice one.. me too wants to try my hand at this..
again tooo sad...
wow. this is very good.
but very sad :(
:( dukh laga.
@Iya: Thanks, I am sure u will come up with something nice too... n was glad you read me with enough thoughts to write to me like you did.. you know what i mean :) keep doing so pls..
@Dhiren: But you did balance it with ur super funny one. Its a tough mental exercise, will try to come up with something lighter next time..looks like there will be 55 word fiction floating all around soon..
@Masood: Thanks and yes I also cursed myself for writing something so sad..
@Roo: glad the sadness came out. hehe..
Good one but hurting.
Sad one! But well written because it could evoke emotion!
@Solilo: Thank you.. Its sad I know but dint intend to hurt anyone dear..
@IHM: :) ur traffic one went bouncers for me though...
@Deepika: Yo!!!
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